Shoah: Ins Feuer- sneek peek

I am an empty shell, nothing is left in me, nothing can replace the the pain I'm in from the broken heart he has given me. The memory of the hurt too hard to erase , and too much to repair. With all the turmoil around me I am fixated on the fact I do not have him anymore. All the things he had said, all the emotions he had claimed run dry and meaningless. There is nothing worth living for and now I am made as inconsequential as they say. My frail body wracked with a undefined sickness as sobs escape my dry lips into the darkness. No use for tears as I am barren and there is no hope in them. Tears won't change the fact that he is no longer in love with me.

The never-ending smell of death that's always following me permiates the air in the confined place I am forced to live in. This death seems more welcoming as I gaze hopelessly into the wasteland tyranic future. My mothers whispered prayers over me the only sound in the night.

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Forced to be a Nazi to find her...Forced to act an animal with the Gestapo to seek her...Forced to act in a play where I must be the eligable 'Nazi' bachelor to have an Aryian wife.... OH! What turmooil I am in to know my true love sees and does not know the truth....

Shoah: Ins Feuer

"The darkness stiffled my ability to breath as an overwhelming sense of dread permeated into my pores. Cramped body against body,foul odor against foul odor as death hung in the air. Paniced whispers and sobs echoing in the back of a truck...heading into what could only be the entrance to hell. My heart racing in anxiety as the truck slowed to a stop...'Where are we?' my mind yelled into the silence."


And so the journey begins again...it's been awhile since i've written Shoah, but now my fingers ache to make the verbage scrapes on paper...my mind a flurry of grand ideas. It's time...to launch into the second book...

First book...ended with a young German man, Leonard, joining the Nazi's to go and find his love, a jewish girl, Abigail who was taken into the unknown fate of the Nazi's.

This book will be a very dark place .... a dark mind bending and fear inducing nightmare of the truth of Holocaust and the reign of terror Hitler had done.
I can only hope i am up to the darkness i will encounter as i write about this...absorbing myself into the characters so that at the end...people will be searching to see if it's based on a true story.

And to those who are reading this...thank you...for your support. Shoah series is my passion in life...and i am constructing it into reality.
For those I love...you will be part of this writing journey with me...so thank you in advance...for all you have and will do for me.

Shoah

Taking readers through the haunting Holocaust from 1939 - 1942, ‘Shoah’, sets in motion the tormenting love story between a German and Jew. Through the societal angst, Leon and Abigail struggle to find a way to love each other in secret only to be torn apart. Join them as they embark on a legendary love story to be with each other.


"The small, the helpless, the innocent: these were the victims of Adolph Hitler's Holocaust.
- The Holocaust Chronicle

*Currently finished with book, but on hold due to editing issues. No release date yet...stay tuned.

Final draft is lookin good. Ordered a private view of the book...to look it over...double check editing problems and see if the overall layout and  flow is good. The cover is the sketch that my brother is currently working on. The final picture will be in full color!

Shoah update!

So I've taken a long enough break and im moving things around in Shoah: editing, adding,subtracting etc.
I'm thinking of adding a map of the homes location as well as Warsaw map- not sure how im gonna do that...my art skills are crap.

Here's the template/sketch of the cover drawn by my brother. Remember this is a sketch and the awesomeness comes in his perfecting =)It will be in full color!
Heres the description i gave to him



So heres info on Leonard (Leon): Looks like...(Simon Baker)

19 years old

He blonde,blue eyes,6 foot tall, lean semi-built frame,clean cut/shaven. Simple clothes

Abigail (heroine of book).

18 years old

Looks like...( Audrey Hepburn)

Waist length straight black hair,brown eyes, petite frame.

As for clothes..she's gotta be wearing pants of some kind. I Gotta research what kind they wore back then.

Setting: For the city keep it like the size of Castle Rock,CO..not too big or too small.

Going to be at night, so for lighting could have a small picnic laid out in background with flashlight illuminating them, starry skies and lights from the neatby city ( which is Warsaw,Poland).

Shoah Update

Taking a small vacation from Shaoh, I am now ready to get back into it. Hopefully this break i've taken will give me insight on editing and making it better more fuller story. Deadline for publication is still April!

Tidbits!

So in celebration of getting close to finishing my book I've decided it might be fun to put up excerpts from my book. The mystery will be in when and where it is in the book, but also to allow people to see what it's about and draw an interest. Check back often and become a follower to this blog!

Todays Glimpse:

"I dropped to the ground as he ripped the rest of my clothes off feeling his body press on top of me suffocating me with its heat. Tears streaked down my face as I felt violated and overwhelmingly powerless to fight against the onslaught of rape."